Pleasure turns Sour – Creative Writing

A big beautiful mansion sitting right up the road of a busy small town. The outer parts is as beautiful as a paradise and it everyman’s fantasy with a welcoming golden writing hanging on the beautiful light blue wall. The inner part is as bright as a tunnel with loads of space. The building was so bright that it light up the whole town.
I was on a tour with some friends to find an interesting adventure to write in our novel.
We have travelled from town to town till we came to this town called GRAVE HILL. The people of Grave hill are very nice people and there were loads of things to write about the town and the way they survive on their little farm and how they live together as a family helping each other in time of trouble. They were very welcoming and made us feel appreciated and they also were willing to help us with our adventure and they also promised to show us around the town but because we arrived late they told us to wait till morning. The only problem we had was accommodation; the people never had a big apartment to accommodate us.

You can pass the night in my Attic…Said the Old Lady
AN ATTIC… exclaimed Sandra Hell no, How can I live my big bedroom all just to come and sleep in an attic, there is absolutely no way that is going to happen (she whispered).
We were not thrilled by the old woman’s offer so we refuse it. Having being attracted by the golden bright writing ‘A HOME FOR PLEASURE’ on the front of the big bright mansion that was up the road we ask the people if we can pass the night there, the people did not hesitate to let us stay there they just told us that if we know that we can stay there alone.
YES… We shouted excitedly We are going to be fine alone beside we have sleepovers and we have the whole house to ourselves, so that should not be a problem said Denise.
Thrilled and excited about sleeping in a mansion we couldn’t wait to get into the mansion. Having led us to the front of the beautiful and bright mansion the people said good night and went back to their hut.
Excitedly we walked around the mansion went in and out of the building we saw a big swimming pool,7 double sized bedroom, a kitchen with loads of food and all the necessary things you need in a kitchen, a king sized living room with a big screen TV like the one in the cinema.
This is way better than sleeping in some old attic… said Clare.
I cannot wait to get in that pool…said Denise
I am so hungry… said Clare
I can wait to sleep in that big sized bedroom… said Sandra
What about you, why are u so quiet? Asked Denise
Nothing on like you people I’m not so thrilled I just have this bad feeling… I said
What is it this time? Asked Clare
I’m just surprised and baffled that’s all… I said
About what? Asked Denise
I just don’t get it, why is a big beautiful mansion like this being abandoned here? Why is a big building like this built in a small town like this? Who lives here? Were are they? Why is there no evidence that someone live here not even a picture or if it was a hotel why is there no receptionist here?
I had enough of you and your feelings we are here already and there is nothing that has happened… said Sandra so why don’t we just enjoy our one night stay here without your feelings can you do that for us please… pleaded Sandra.
Ok then I will try my best I’m just baffled that all…I replied.
Denise got in the pool, while Sandra went to bed and Clare to the kitchen while I was left alone scared and baffled in the living room.
After couple minute of silence ahhhhhhhhhhhhh…screamed Denise
What is wrong? I asked as I raced outside to the pool.
On getting there I found the pool has turned RED with Denise’s body floating around lifelessly. I was so scared so I raced inside to tell my friends then I heard another scream but this time it was coming from the kitchen only to find Clare was no longer in the kitchen but all I found was a cracked egg with BLOOD in it and Clare’s body was no were to be find.
So scared I raced outside to see if we can get any help on get outside whole town was dark because the house that brightened up the town has turn dark and the golden writing has changed to red writing ‘A HOME OF HORROR’
I was so scared I could not go out because it was already dark so I raced back inside to go and get Sandra and explain what has happened to her. on getting up the stair I did not find a big bedroom no more but all I saw was a big dark trench with loads of dead bodies and Sandra was no were to be found.
So scared and knowing that I’m not safe I took my pen and wrote all that as happened and I left a note for the people to take to my school in the hope that I might be able to survive this horror.
When I finished writing, it was already morning and things were back o normal except my friends were no more.